Day of the Ninja, Page 7 by JHoagland

Poser • Comics/Cartoons • posted on Sep 22, 2003

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The day continues... here is page 7 of Day of the Ninja. Rendered entirely in Poser 4, some models made in Lightwave, and composited in Photoshop. If you are reading this for the first time, here is some navigation help: Page 1, Page 6, Page 8

Comments (2)

richardnovak77

9:34PM | Mon, 22 September 2003

there's so much right with this image... and so much wrong. let me try to help a little... the GOOD: i love that you're trying comicbook type material. there's not nearly enough of that done with poser. also, i see a little humor with "tom ninja", and that's cool. the BAD: the lighting is just terrible. i don't mean that in a bad way, i just mean that it's so flat and non-dynamic, it doesn't do justice to your ideas. try some different lighting, or props, or at least a background. immerse us in realism :) the UGLY: ug... those balloons... so square... must... reletter... comic... i'm really looking forward to seeing more. in fact i wish you'd post your pages in the forum so i don't just happen by them. good luck!!

lgrant

2:30PM | Fri, 26 September 2003

I agree, traditional ellipsoid speech balloons would look much better. If you have Illustrator available, you might be interested in my tutorial on making speech balloons in Illustrator. It's at http://www.renderosity.com/tut.ez?Form.ViewPages=301 . If you don't have Illustrator, you can download the free balloon packs from Blambot: http://www.blambot.com/balloons/index.html