The Dark Djinn by KazenoRyu
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Well hi everyone, this is my first try here, and as you all see, i'm a noob. But I want to improve. I'll need your help, please give your opinion and advice. thank you
Comments (9)
Juji
Colors and inks are great. If you want the movement behind the purple guy to be less distracting to his shape, you might try a motion blur. (Of course, if you got the effect you were going for, just shut me up. :P) Nice job!
KazenoRyu
Well I actually tried some things but after two days on this work, I decided to stop here, usually I don't spend some much time on a drawing, and It goes right into the bin. Thanks a lot, i'll try the motion blur next time...
SeanE
usually lens flares are a bad bad thing but it looks ok here - try a shiney star-thingy like I use instead? More contrast on the skintones and you're going to be doing fine.
Jaden
looks good, good job
newave654321
Really cool drawing. Keep it up!
KazenoRyu
I really appreciate the advices given by you guys, (SeanE & Juji, i've downloaded almost every picture of your galleries). I'll try my best to improve...Thank you very much
tiyoyo
Alors lc grandiose, continue comme didou !! Tres btaf... Vivement la suite !
SlayerX
Very good!!
LCGuy
Nice work... juji's advice regarding the motion blur would be my own, as well. I really like your linework.. very neat. Keep up the great work.