The Visit by whoareyuo
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Description
Darkness, shadows dancing,
Running inky fingers,
through your mind.
Screaming Nighthawks,
Plague foreboding skies.
Earths life expires,
While claws of blackness,
Cradle the falling sun,
Breading vaparous creatures.
"Inder be the one
to perish next".
The list compiled,
Your life forfeit.
Sleep well poor Inder,
For dancing Crawlers,
And howling Nighthawks,
Storm down upon thee
In chariots of blackened gold.
Pale, young, full of pride,
You scare me not,
With your foolish smile,
And boastfull talk.
You'll end the same,
As all the rest,
Face down in a grave,
In sinfull flesh.
Tonite, poor Inder,
May be your last.
But until your end,
Remember my words.
Life vanishing-
With every tick,
Twelfth hour fading fast.
Your youth is gone.
Wasted years, No rewind.
Prepare for sleep,
Long and endless.
The blade thy judge.
Sleep poor Inder, Sleep.
Justice served.
* Inder is a name of a fictious person.
Comments (12)
gallimel
this is great. The image, very expressive indeed, and the poem, absolutely wonderful.
Tanialmeida
this work screams volumes, well done keep it up!!!
whoareyuo
i did this on the back of an old school copy, and got alot of marks from chalk pastels, but this is where i do most of my work. thank you gallimel and tanialmeida, this piece and poetry mean alot to me and reveal alot about me if u can understand it.
Bobbie25
very cool hun very cool the poem is very deep xoxo
whoareyuo
needs loads of postwork lol STE
lahavana
this reminds me of the Moth-man... very,very cool!
LittleStarInTheDark
Cool, both piccy and poem. Sadly lacking in boobies, still.... have one of mine ;) ( o ) x
whoareyuo
lol @ lil star, how many u got :P i'll take TEN!!! ste
JVRenderer
Interesting looking piccy.
Jayme
ver very nice love the writing alot Great job
Vampiress
Good work my love
Maniac_Insaniac
brilliant, exellent work on the poem too