Daughter Of Atumn by kiwidoc
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Description
In colours all of copper and of flame -
She comes
With lips like berries red and sweet -
She smiles
Like the dancing of the twisting, turning leaves -
She flies
A whisper on a wild and westlin wind -
She is gone
The woman comes from a pic by stockofthestars @ http://www.deviantart.com/view/3223044/ The cloudscape come from fiveskyy @ http://www.deviantart.com/view/1229806/ The leaves in her wings and in her skirt are from a pic by NV-Stock @ http://www.deviantart.com/view/2956064/
Comments (10)
kreepingtyme
Cool mixture! I love the idea of using the leaves for the wings! Very nice! :)
Tanialmeida
oh my, and u have blend it all so very well, beautiful colors!!!!
gallimel
some shades (for instance from the shirt to the "skirt" made of leaves (great idea) would make it less flat. some on the wings as well. But it's a good work and avery cool idea too :)
cbender
GREAT
-christian
kiwidoc
I a min the prcess of making some changes after gallimel's very helpful comments. Watch this space for Daughter of Daughter of Autumn ;)
Tammy
Nice job I do like the leaf wings, will look later to check out the changes you are making. I really like it so far.
ShadowWind
Wonderfully peaceful and expressive, beautiful work on this, look forward to seeing the changes myself, if I haven't already :)
gunsan
This idea of autumn leaves as wings is great. I like her a lot and is curiously waiting for the offspring :-)
Rockatansky
Wouldn't her wings fall off, being Autumnal leaves? Nice idea, I will look out for the re-post. P.S. You've missed a 'u' from the word 'Autumn'
kiwidoc
Yikes - you have no idea ho wmany people didn't spot that missing U. red face Mayber her wings will fall off. I wanted to give the idea of transience, of her being with us for a short time before she vanishes. I hoped to convey that in the poem.