desert by carmello
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a floating city above the desert
it is more ore less still a wip. i am working on a widescreen of this one with some foreground, i.e. a desert road with sign/billboards and fences...not so sure yet about what to add ( maybe an eveningscene). still trying. got ideas?
thanks
Comments (17)
abotrix
nice render. Love the concept....
turner
It's looking good so far. A little differentiation in the grass perhaps? (is 'differentiation' a real word?)
Markal
Very nice...although floating cities are not new, you did an excellent job. How about a ruined, old, ground city or maybe just an old miners shack in the foreground? The grass looks fine. The clould is nice, but you could shorten the area at the top a bit. Great job!!
jddog
add...? Personaly for me nothing, this is quite Magritte stylee in 3D. I lovit like is it now ! Eventually work more on colors and contrast. Congrats excellent concept !
gunn26
This is a great peice just needs a little heat haze or a tumble weed
pingo
great WIP. I'm curious about the clouds... how?
YL
Great for me ! I would change nothing...
Lynne
How about a tiny figure on the ground to really give a feel for the dimensions of the city above? So far very poetic feel!
kenmo
This is professional quality....I believe a road in the foreground with old signs & billboards wouls add to the atmosphere...
Doublecrash
I think that your idea with the road is cool. And yes, something to give the scale of it. I love the structure.
Nod
Love it. This could be a book cover.
tse60
Great piece of sci-fi art. I like it very much. Well done. :) Mirek [Bryce]
carmello
@nod: i already made a bookcover with it:) i posted it in the mixed medium gallery: http://www.renderosity.com/viewed.ez?galleryid=522990&Start=1&Artist=carmello&ByArtist=Yes
Curious
very cool, i really like it
Perry6
Love the look of this! Very creative and excellent modeling. Seems to need something... not sure what, though.
MartinK
You need more textural detail on the city. Resolve the sky a bit- its great at the top but lacks strong character at the base. Good potential though!
carmello
Thanks martink! i really appreciate a helpful comment on how to improve. ill go over it...8)