First Sight (Levi, Age 14) by Ejd1

Poser • Youth Artists • posted on Nov 13, 2003

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Please comment, i'd love to learn any new things.

Comments (6)

pierrecolat

7:14PM | Thu, 13 November 2003

Great picture. From a composition point of view I would move the figure a bit too the right so that it is 2 thirds of the width of the pic if you see what I mean and maybe a little blur to give more depth. I don't mean to be critical. This is one of the most interesting pictures I've seen here for a while.

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Artzy

9:44PM | Thu, 13 November 2003

Nicely Done!

pazu

9:51PM | Thu, 13 November 2003

Wonderful illustration! This image has an idea and a story behind it. If you keep working from from concept and story, you're art will always be interesting. Work on technique, but never lose sight of the story.

Jay7347

11:24AM | Fri, 14 November 2003

You did an absolutely great job on this. So many people young or old just throw objects together without a thought. You had an idea, or concept, and followed it thru to execution. Wonderful! My only suggestion would be to crop down the sky a bit to enhance a feel of horizontal movement. Congrats, you made a wonderful image. -jay

ladynimue

2:59PM | Sat, 15 November 2003

excellent composition, I especially like your use of negative and positive space :]

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