Comments Please. . .need suggestions! by TerryAllred
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Help, Please Comment! I am continuing to work on a piece for poems. I need this to print poems on for female Piano Students. Any ideas???
This version has ideas added by past comments. A special thanks to "oiram" for the idea of making the rose sepia and laying one on the piano. Compare this version with the one at:
http://www.renderosity.com/viewed.ez?galleryid=558489
What do you think?
Comments (8)
AngelicaB
I tink is beautiful work!!! I liket veryu much.
redbeard
It's a very nice image on its own so I feel funny suggesting changes. But if you are going to use this as the paper on which the poems are written, which I think is what you are saying, then you might move the large rose a little to the left, fade the piano out a tad more, and maybe make the rose on the piano stand out a little more for contrast. I'm not an expert and all of these suggestions depend on the size of the font you are using, its color, and where you are going to put the poem on the image. I would want the image to be clearly visible as this would be for piano students, but the poem should probably be the dominant thing. Good luck.
zman1
It looks awsome just like it is.
oiram
perfect this is great.
PapaGuru
Maybe the rose somewhat more to the right!? Like the light in this picture!
irenesdesigns
Very Pretty
Kropot
I will never tell anybody what to do. But I can make suggestions. I would bring the rose a little to the left, what is good for printing the poem, as that needs space. I would also change the direction of the rose, I would make it the same as the angel as the line of the stick that holds up the pianocover. Then I would change the shadow of the piano and make it in line with the angel of the pianostick and the rose. That will create a sort of depht feel. What bugs me a bit is that the rose has a clear light coming from the right, but it does not look that the shadow of the piano is following that direction. For me thats the most diffecult part of mixing diverse objects and get it right. Hope it helps, and tnx for adding me ;)
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