First Hunt by adm5050
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Deer Hunt
Bouncing energetically around the car, I waited impatiently for my dad. This was the first major hunt of my life. We were heading out on a great adventure-a whitetail deer hunt.
At 12:30 a.m. we arrived, tired and hungry at my uncle's camp deep within the piney forest near Groveton. My uncle met us with steaming hot coffee, which streams of vapor wafting into the frigid night air. Luke-warm soup quickly satisfied our hunger as we surveyed the towering pines and sniffed the dying campfires of the other hunters. With a hopeful attitude, we rolled into our sleeping bags for a restless night of sleep in anticipation of the hunt on the morrow.
Rising to frost on the ground and a cold campfire, we wrapped ourselves in layers of warm clothing. Quickly, we started a small fire with its dancing shadows. In the predawn night, I marveled at the quiet and sparkling light which reflected off the glistening ice which lay serenely about the forest floor. As I trod cautiously towards the stand, the crunch of ice underfoot was like the crack of a bat against a hard thrown ball.
With my hands shaking and my stomach in my throat, I climbed slowly into the tower pine tree. Every scratch of the leaves brought a violent reaction from my over active imagination. The wind silently whistling through the treetops was my constant companion as I nervously waited for the silent deer.
The icy cold brought the furred animals in search of their meager meals. Tails twitching and claws scratching the bark of the swaying pine trees, the squirrels scampered around for nuts and pine seeds. Armadillos blindly grubbed along the forest floor, making a most horrendous sound in their noisy search for worms and grubs. Raccoons made their way home from foraging for their nocturnally dinners. All there sites and sounds both scared and delighted me.
Slowly I raised my rifle, a 30-30 Marlin lever action with a Weaver 4x scope, scanning the brush for the elusive deer. Leg raised, ears cocked forward in a state of alert, the small doe eased into the clearing. Looking back into the dense brush, with quick turns of her beautiful head, she cautiously advanced. Tail flickering, hooves slowly pawing the ground, she advanced slowly across the clearing until she vanished as a ghost in the mist. I wondered if it all had really happened.
Comments (6)
adm5050
I made a grave mistake yesterday, I removed this story from Rendo.. after two very hateful and slanderous comments. Guess I am getting soft in my old age. Ohhhh well
DennisReed
Awwww, critics will make you do that. At 1st I was appalled, then I thought, cute it was a camera shoot, then ----. At least it was a doe and survived. Cute story, and gorgeous picture! There is a split in my family on this issue, my twin once hung the head of his trophy 5pt Buck on his wall. That Christmas I sent him a 'Bambi head mounted on a wall' image with some snide comment. We don't talk much these days, but, then again, we never have! LOL!
SophiaDeer
I think this is a very well written story!!
georgedvore
good story. the pic isn't up which is a shame. interesting thing hunting - if you were to go and shoot a deer, i guess you would eat it - so i can't see what the big deal is. i bet those ppl who made comments are non-vegetarians. if that is the case, it's amusing how they only think it's permissible to hunt at the supermarket. worst kind of animal lover in my opinion. one who lets other ppl do the dirty work. funny thing how fishermen don't get that much flak (over sports fishing) either. guess fish ain't as cute as bambi:oP
wizardofnoz
Lovely story
Bothellite
Found this wonderful piece deep in your works. Saw your comment about rude remarks. I'm not a hunter in spirit but spent much time in the hills with hunters and learned to respect their art. This brought back memories and is beautifully worded.