Together We Be (revise) by PixyWriter
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I think I revised my origional which I like better. I hoped you like it, overlooking the bad spelling and probly bad grammer. I was in a rush and I still don't think I did a great job. :-p But thats me. Thank you very much for viewing and this is a poem for a person very important too me.
Blah Blah Blah (MY Thoughs *Below*)
--- Life is The greatest experience you will ever have, enjoy it as much as possable, take the good with the bad, no matter how hard it gets there could always be someone out there with harsher porblems.
(My person thoughts you never have to listen to them :-p)
Comments (4)
Flak
Heck poetry was something I could never write. Congrats on having a go and getting your thoughts down. Well done.
tatooedravengirl
nice poem I love writing makes things seem more open when they are out in the open..thanks for sharing your poetry with us..merry ho ho ^v^ julia
gallimel
The messaage also in the outside of picture just deserves a big clapping :)
Aimwha
Can you say spellcheck? It loses so much of its passion when you dont understand what the poet is saying because of bad grammar.