Follow Me by Nicholette
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Riding down the road again after I leave your house. Left at noon, nothing you gave
but me a hug. The hug of love, warmth, happiness, and greatness. Sometimes everyday
I watch at the road and dream of you coming to visit. I hate waiting but it also
makes the heart grow fonder like my heart.
Before I met you I was unwanted, in a
world full of emotionless shadows that haunted me everywhere I went. I thought I
was going to be alone forever and grow into an old lady searching for her lost
love. This world I thought is cruel hearted and God doesn
Comments (1)
romanceworks
This is a wonderful story and I really like your graphic that goes with it. I really felt the girl's pain, and longing, and her love. Your images are strong, your writing style very easy to read, and engaging. The only thing I might suggest is that you format your writing into paragraphs, so it will be easier to read., And when you have someone speak, put the dialogue into a new paragraph. Wonderful, very creative writing. Hope to ready more. You have lots of writing ability. :o) CC