Apartment Redone by bukaroobonzai
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Total rendering time 7 min and 15 seconds. I changed the size of the windows and widened the bed....Hope ya like it...Lemme Know...www.dismalstudios.com
Comments (5)
CdGGambit
Waaaaaay to sparse for a room that size. If you just want to keep the room only that furniture, then you need to cut the room down by like 200%. Also try adding some plants, those always pick up a bland room.
Nos
Try a dutch angle on the camera, and maybe adding a knocked over floor lamp to add to the "Unsettling" feeling of the scene.
bukaroobonzai
Yes I know its sparse. I am slowly adding piece by piece. I was plannin on addin an area rug...and an old tv set & stand....and now that yall mention it some unrest and maybe a plant. Thanks for the input...:D
oooZENOooo
A much better improvement from your last render, my friend. However the scale/sizing is still a bit out. For example the pillows on the bed are bigger that the chair. The desk and chair are too small compare with the other furniture. You also have light coming through both windows and showing up on the floor. Could this be possible for the sun to be shining directly through both windows? It maybe the room is in the corner of the house, and maybe the sun is facing that corner. However the specular window highlights on the floor, are at contradicting angles. So if I were you I would disable the gobo or light shadow coming through one of your windows. And lastly a little more bump mapping to the floor. Despite my criticism bud, you are doing well and are getting there
Moebius87
oooZENOooo has some good points with regards to scale (specially if you are going for realism) and lighting. The skewed camera angle might really make this work. If I could suggest some skirting and cornice to the room... the window moulding sort of implies that this bit of detailing wouldn't be out of place. :o) You might also consider a lighter paint job for the ceiling, and a frame for both the poster and for the mirror. The mirror would make even more sense with an armoire somewhere in the image. If you do decide to revisit the furniture here, please have a look at a sleigh bed and a roll top console with matching chair. I like the area rug idea and the floor lamp, but it might be interesting to be a bit thread bear. This is really terrific work! Keep on posting!