Sharp Focus by raven_nightmares

Photography • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Jan 20, 2004

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This was taken at the same time of yesterday's photo. It's a different razor...older...heavier...with more texture. As you can tell, I raised the f-stop, but I was afraid that it lost some of the atmosphere. Please, if you can, tell me what you think? Any suggestions to make it better are always appreciated. Thanks.

Comments (13)

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WandM

2:28AM | Tue, 20 January 2004

It's perfect in this way!

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SNAKEY

3:03AM | Tue, 20 January 2004

Razor sharp;)

Anugama

4:33AM | Tue, 20 January 2004

It's good the way it is really; you could possibly experiment with different backgrounds/additions and see what else could work. The possibilities may be endless... Great work!

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Niutek

4:51AM | Tue, 20 January 2004

This one's 'darker' but not just because there's less light in it :))) The textures are fantastic, indeed, and I love the reflection on the handle - almost makes it look like a painting. I also think you did a splending job on composition here (the razor vs the seams in your jacket) - it's so geometrical! I absolutely love this shot as it is. It is perfect.

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dark_storm

5:34AM | Tue, 20 January 2004

IT's an excelent shot my friend. Very well done. Matbe ill try with a lighter background like white or something else...because this is is too dark. I mean is the same colour as the razor. The background is dominating on the razor. Whit a lighter background, the razon will be more important in the photograph. I hope that will help you. This one is excelent anyways. !!!!!!:O)!!!!!!

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DrmzRmyne

5:46AM | Tue, 20 January 2004

I agree with Dark Storm, great shot, but experimenting may bring even more interesting results. Keep at it, it's great!

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tatooedravengirl

8:16AM | Tue, 20 January 2004

THIS SOOOO ROCKS..and i get what your trying to do with the dark mood..I love it..cngrads on a perfect picture..^v^Julia

logiloglu

11:21AM | Tue, 20 January 2004

excellent still life. !!!!!! :O) !!!!!!!

Michelle A.

12:38PM | Tue, 20 January 2004

I love it! Still moody IMHO, and I love the textures from the leather....!

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Lalani

2:27PM | Tue, 20 January 2004

I think I like this one better.. As Michelle says, it still has the dark mood.. and the amount of texture from the jacket is just wonderful. =) Love the pov again, excellent work =)

cynlee

5:26PM | Tue, 20 January 2004

hmmmmmm, has a wonderful, evocative mood, really like the contrast of the leather (& smell, if that's possible) with the smooth handle & sharp aged metal... the low light is perfect :]

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Akinom

1:31AM | Wed, 21 January 2004

Agree to above... this is perfect! The sharp razor, the reflection on the handle and the leather texture... gorgeous composition with a wonderful dark mood!

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