Dining Set by Dave5153
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Description
I'm Normally a Poser freak, but due to redundancy at my work, im starting a new business making furniture.
Can you all Crit this piece for me as im trying to get it as close to a photo shot as possible.
All of your comments are most welcome.
Best wishes DaveB
Comments (12)
fmtoffolo
love it,,maybe the lens used is not the right one
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pretty room
sakauble
The design of the furniture is awesome. I want it for my kitchen. The colors are cool. I'm trying to find something wrong with it but, for the application you mentioned, I don't see anything. Would make a great catalogue piece.
iamonk
It look's like the floor could use either a little gloss, or a little bump. I'm assuming the tabletop is glass, but none of the lighting seems to pass through it. It's a great piece, I'm finding it hard to pick apart.
MINTY1974
Excellent render and modeling. The one little thing (and it is little so you should maybe ignore me LOL) is that the skirting board in the room should be a little bit nearer the floor. Apart from that I love your designs, I saw something similar at the design museum in london a few years ago. Great stuff!
violet
beautiful dining-set !! excellent design !!!
Wezall
Saweet! Natural feel to light, and textures. The soft gloss and bump of the floor is perfect to me. If anything needed tweeking at all it would be how the wall to the left doesn't seem to line up the wall on right but it's actually an optical illusion I think. Same problem occurs with photography sometimes. Camera angle change might fix it. This is very realistic work.
brschmidt
Nice work and like the furniture design. A couple of things that you may want to look at are the chair rail looks a little large could be the lense but it's a small nit... and I'm assuming that is base board heating or the molding is floating... and maybe a touch of noise in the paint material. Really just little ideas because I really do like the piece.
enax
Very neat with a high quality. Your new business has future. Well done Dave!
pashiel
I really do like the design of this set its very original and I think marketable. You just may be very well suited for this furniture thing. Maybe a center piece on the table Well done
patrickn
Awesome designer dining set, Good luck Dave :)
zerobyte
CAUSTIC! this image should have tons of it, since you got lotsa chrome and glass (? on tabletop?). cautic will make your scene more realistic. anyways, its almost perfet already :)