Scene Noir by madmogs

New Artists • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Jan 26, 2004

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Description

Concept art for an unfinished story. Also my first serious attempt at 3D modelling, so constructive criticism/suggestions for improvement more than usually welcome.

Comments (11)

unicornstar

6:25PM | Mon, 26 January 2004

needs no improvement,love it

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zoren

6:30PM | Mon, 26 January 2004

very nice design, definatly sets the mood for a story. maybe the liquid (blood?) could look less like glass.....well done.

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MINTY1974

6:36PM | Mon, 26 January 2004

like the image a lot, agree with zoren about the blood looks a bit too plastic like at the moment. A good first attempt, what app did you use to create the pic?

jstsittinghere

7:27PM | Mon, 26 January 2004

impressive image!

madmogs

3:42AM | Tue, 27 January 2004

Made in Bryce. I can't believe I forgot to put that. Ack, you're right about the blood, Zoren & Minty. I made the material before I'd figured out that materials as they lookd in materials lab bore no resemblance to how they looked in a render. Have now figured out how to fix the edges of the larger stain so will play. Thanks for the feedback everyone!

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Shadane

4:51AM | Tue, 27 January 2004

nicely done. i think you have one too many lamp posts (personal opionon) i love the designs that flow thru it. well done and keep it up: we will be waiting for more

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highcrow

4:54AM | Tue, 27 January 2004

Excellent modeling.The 3D is very impressive.Wonderful sense of depth.Really fantastic!!I do however agree that perhaps there should be less lamp posts.

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tynana

9:44AM | Tue, 27 January 2004

Excellent modeling! Wish I could do that! Very impressive! Great depth and lighting. Agree with the above about the lamp posts. Maybe space them out and darken the scene a little would make it creepier. (Just an opinion it's excellent as it is!) Keep up the great work! :)

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awadissk

4:17AM | Thu, 29 January 2004

Perfectly done. excellent!

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StrmRyder

4:39AM | Thu, 29 January 2004

Very intriguing image. The use of greyscale with just the blood colored does give it a very overall ominous tone. As to the lighting... I totally disagree with the thought that there are too many. Infact, the shadowing cast by them is what draws this image out. The pattern that is created on the runway floor is the most eye catching feature. I would however suggest removing or atleast re-angling the set lighting so that there are less shadows cast on the back wall by random railing and light post shadows. The reflective door gives it a very infinite appearance and really does wonders for the overall "fear" of the image. Great work. I'd LOVE to see this with the blood reworked to give it that final touch. Kudos!

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