For A Moment by qmont

Writers • (none) • posted on Jan 31, 2004

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This is my first attempt at writing some thing, so please excuse any spelling mistakes, as I am good at that. this is done in song format, and I hope you enjoy. FOR A MOMENT I found your old scrapbook, just the other day. While i was busy packing, my life away. I couldn't belive, it had survived I had to stop for a Moment, I was set back for a moment And for the first time,I think i cried The cover was worn an dirty, an there on the first page. Was a picture of us, torn and yellow with age I couldn't beleive, we were so young. I had to smile for a Moment I could not belive in a moment All of our dreams, somehow had come undone. We were just kids, We were just friends. It wasn't the way, It was suppose to end. I found the old red Rose, that I had gave you. Inside a birthday card, you had just turned twenty two. I couldn't belive, how time has gone by. I closed my eyes for a moment, I held it close for a moment And for the first time, I had to wonder why. As I turned through the pages, of our life together. The promises of love, happiness and forever. I couldn't belive, we didn't even try. I went a little crazy for a moment, I lost myself for a moment. As waves of emotions went rushing by. We were just kids. We were just friends. This wasn't the way, It was suppose to end. I closed the book for the last time, a chapter of my life. A emptiness crept inside me, as I reached out for my wife. I couldn't belive, you were really gone. I held my breath for a moment I heard my heartbeat for a moment....... We were just kids, We were just friends. It wasn't the way, It was suppose to end. No this wasn't the way, This was suppose to end.

Comments (15)

zoku01

6:58PM | Sat, 31 January 2004

Deeply moving and emotional piece. Beautifully written.

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Mel3d

7:01PM | Sat, 31 January 2004

I really love it John.I lose my words,beautiful

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SophiaDeer

7:23PM | Sat, 31 January 2004

Well done John!

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j-art

8:34PM | Sat, 31 January 2004

you already know what i think about this poem - this is really very touching - think all of us can feel with it, think we all own such old scrapbooks full of memories - which comes back when we see the old pages - the curious about those memories is that we mostly remember only the good things, or is it only me? but thats all long past - lets live the moment and look positiv in the future -- my friend you did a really great job with your poem - feel free to do some more - i love it!!!!!!!!!!excellent job

Telgar

2:16AM | Sun, 01 February 2004

Vrey sensitive words, very well write my friend. If all the men could keep a heart of child the world would be better.

vlaaitje

3:05AM | Sun, 01 February 2004

This is very touching, and you know what I mean. You make a start with something deep inside. It is good for share all that feelings with others. This is the beginning for try to find yourself, if you know what I mean. Wonderful John, it touching my heart. Do more like this way and you will see it helps you a lot.....your friend Ilona

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DrmzRmyne

7:08AM | Sun, 01 February 2004

~clears throat~ uh, wow! First, I didn't even know you were a writer so this comes as a huge surprise. :) Extremely touching lyrics, that I'm sure a lot of people will be able to relate to. Well written and full of emotion something I think should be seen or heard more often. Excellent to no end John!!!

andymoraitis

10:10AM | Sun, 01 February 2004

Sharing something so deep and personal really moves me and shows a piece of you that I hadn't experienced before. This took a great deal of strength and guts and I think it's beautiful and somber at the same time. Excellent job here my dear friend.

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wizardofnoz

10:21AM | Sun, 01 February 2004

Deeply moving and heart-rending. Thank u for sharing. May the Eternal One grant u the solace for question that can never be asked or answered.

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Tommy3D

1:09PM | Sun, 01 February 2004

John, I am at a loss for words. You have moved me to tears, stirring strong emotions is what great writing is supposed to do. You are a great artist in every sense of the word. Thank you.

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KingPtolemy

12:50PM | Tue, 03 February 2004

Very emotional and touching beautiful lyrics

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Kath13

2:00AM | Wed, 04 February 2004

This is a beautiful piece of writing John, very emotional. Well done, I hope you do more!

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Bothellite

9:39PM | Wed, 04 February 2004

You are full of expression and expressiveness. Keep on writing!!

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che18530

7:48PM | Thu, 05 February 2004

Very beautiful and so full of loss and regret. You composition is well put together...has alot of depth and emotional content. Wonderful!...Cheryl

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danob

6:26PM | Sun, 08 February 2004

Ah John I missed this first one my friend..I know something of the feelings you express so beautifully and with a tender heart.. I hope you carry on writing art has many forms and you are a true artist..