Journey - WIP by pstekky
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HELP!! I liked the concept when I thought of this, but the more I do, the less I like it. Any suggestions? If not, I'm just going to send this one to the scrap pile and start another.
I've stared at this too long to be objective any more, and I honestly don't even know what it is I don't like.. The color, the composition, Be brutal, and let me know what you think.
Thanks,
Rich
Comments (4)
luciferino
This image is fabolous very very beauty bye bye Orietta
Pauli
Hi, Rich, I agree, its an interesting concept, and I had the feeling there should be a little bit more medieval outfit in the scene. I thought at first the face appears as a reflection in a window. Also the white range in the background looks a bit arctical. Hope that helps a little bit.
Bonzodog
The background mountains could be softer in outline, and their colour could be mostly dull green to harmonise with the character. A major stroke might be to show a long faint road or trail, if this is possible, leading towards the sun (whence the title). Keep the fantom face - a nice element. Good luck.
LadyFire_Ice
Hi there,,, fabulous idea. I would have maybe focused her face in the distance a wee bit instead of in the trees. Not very visible there. I am assuming the journey is maybe towards her??? The idea of the path is wonderful. I feel with a few changes this image is salvagable,, so don't send it to the scrap pile just yet haha. I think images of this kind are like a challenge and the victory is to complete it so you like it. "Keep renderin Rich,, "Hugsssss" Linda :-)