looking good need a phone like that

It is preety good, bu it need more work. The white variant looks better. There should be less spiralls. They are too many. The gray line shuldn't be over a phone in thewhie variant. The small phones may could be in higher layer. And try to increse opacity of this small phones. Maybe, but it is just a possibility, You could do something with the balls on display, They could jump from the phone to the scene, do you know, what I mean? And try to make this new layer to change to soft light or something like this. The first variant is balenced in colors. The darker variant has a problem, Because The phone is merging with a background. Iam fucking damned critical. Am I not? But I am doing this only because I am studing the same thing - computer design and virtual graphic. Don't let me discourage you. Because you are doing Great work! There are amny excelent, brillant things as a lines up and down. The Moon is also very nicely used. This gray line(down)a has very beautiful dynamic.So, it is all,what I wanted to say. Good luck!