Feather Girl by catieluvscows
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Description
ta-da! please everyone i NEED comments! how else can i improve?
Comments (7)
JVRenderer
purdie hand drawing. :o)
crazygod
i think it is buatiful first time pic
catieluvscows
this is my best in a long time
TESM
needs work, i like the detail for the feather in the hair. Note that the head is too small, the formula for a better head is eye to chin = eye to top of the skull... The body is a bit too thing, and the legs awkward.. However! Don't be discouraged, drawing takes time to get used to and studing wouldn't be bad either, i know i have! anyways, keep working hard and try to always be better than the last!
catieluvscows
thanks TESM i feel like i just can't get it right but thanks for the input
Momoka
U r a talent, but u should practice more. U should draw more pictures, and try to use paper without any lines. And try to study the pictures on this site, especially the naked ones. For the bodyshape and the right sizes and better poeses(ur arms r still not in the right size compared to the body). ~Momoka~
DeCorum
she looks depressed, take critisism well while trying to maintain your artisic vision