High Sea's by Lightpen
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Description
This is the last and the corrected version of the model HMS VICTORY. I have learned a lot about and with this model.
I appreciate your comments.
Comments (16)
savasart
ZBeautiful work. I love old sailing vessels
ysvry
great ship and render bravo
Meyrink
Molto bello!!!
FitArtistSF
Sorry Lightpen, you are not finished yet. You have a very glaring mistake. Look close, your lowest and middle sails, the largest on the first 2 masts, are floating away from the yardarms. They need to be hanging from each yardarm. The smaller sails, on the ends of each yardarm are fine. The 4 sails needing fixing should be hanging just like the small sails on their yardarms under the forwardmost mast, the Jib Boom. As it is now, some sails and rigging look like they are intersecting or disappearing into other sails. Also, close the gunports. And tune down the reflectivity on the water, it looks too much like glass. And add some spray from the ship. This much water turbulence would cause a large amount of spray.
Blush
Well Personally I like it I love the ships of olde Love and hugs Susan aka Blush~
Ringwraith
STUNNING!This is so cool!
amethyss
FitArtistSF ....where's your stuff.I think the render is great and what effect you tried to achieve you accomplished.As I do with this model, I try to capture a scene that is appealing.Not to try to make it as real as it should be.(and yes FitArtist I have read all about the ship)
garyandcatherine
Wow, fitartistsf really ripped you a new one. Shame on you for not pleaseing the whole world. I think you image is near photo quality. The lighting is really well done as well as the choice of water mats. Really great job!
minos_6
Did anyone else notice how beautifully lit this is? You've created an almost sepia hue without using sepia. A great piece of period work!
phantom309
u got it now!
Bungalo
Well.. I love the light and colours. The tones on the sails are realy great! But I must agree with FitArtistSF. Sails are in completely surealistic positions. And the material of sails shadow side should be closer to some transparency than complete black. The gunports realy should be closed under such cirmustances. And ship jumped way to high on this wave.
whiskeysierra
wonderful work! Great model :o)
Sledstorm
Superb!
Mel3d
great work!amazing ship :)
donny_darko
your almost there, the ropes that are usually on the bottom corners of the sails arent there on any of them. and the rigging on the bow dissapears into the lower mainsails. i dont think rope can do that. the sails are aged, i like that. the water is great, and the sails overlap eachother and stuff. but other than that, a great work of art.from the ashes of disaster grow the roses of sucess.
Ehmed
Great immage!Despite the few errors on the sails and such,still a great work and a cool ship.