CANBERRA by madasadadpole

New Artists • (none) • posted on Mar 06, 2004

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hi all just thought i,d stick this water color up to see if i could get any comments to improve my work thanks for looking

Comments (11)

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Djeser

10:33AM | Sat, 06 March 2004

Beautiful colors, what a pretty, soft painting with the splashes of flowers. Lovely!

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coolcatcom

11:11AM | Sat, 06 March 2004

An incredible beautiful piece of work..simply Excellent and my vote!!!

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madasatadpole

11:34AM | Sat, 06 March 2004

hey dad this is pretty cool..i know you paint water colours..but i really like this one from you...a big bravo ..i love it

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KanDu

1:15PM | Sat, 06 March 2004

This is beautiful work. The only suggestion I could make, is to add a little bit of shadowing,--although, I do not use watercolor's, so that may be a difficult thing to do, I am not sure. But on the whole? This is excellent work! I give my vote V.

Eve

2:56PM | Sat, 06 March 2004

I;ve done a little bit of water colour myself in teh past, and what i was told is this: 'When painting with water colours, it's very easy to resort to drawing shapes and filling them in with blocks of colour. Instead, try to stay away from sharp lines, except where absolutely necessary. And don't add dark lines where there are none' I've notced alot of people do this, and i see itin your work too. The lines you have showing the corners and outline of the building (especially around the chimney) aren't actually there when you look at the scene in real life. So, try to show the edges in your work by representing them as they're shown for real. In this case, by showing the differences in shading between one wall and another. I know that's a lot, and i have to say, the picture is truely lovely anyway... you shoudl be very proud!

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tynana

8:57PM | Sat, 06 March 2004

I know nothing about watercolors but I think this is excellent! The colors are so vibrant! :)

madasadadpole

9:12AM | Wed, 10 March 2004

Thank you for all yourcomments Canberra.

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ShadowWind

9:55PM | Fri, 12 March 2004

I know nothing about watercolor either, but I do love the composition and imagery...

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SageNonions

9:25AM | Sun, 13 June 2004

Looks great I reckon, maybe some details of the shingles/slates on the roofs would add to it? Then again maybe not? Superb as it is though.

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wabe

2:46AM | Mon, 14 June 2004

Beautiful one. Excellent to see you here too. Congratulations to this wonderful image and to your great son, we are very good friends (i think). I hope i see a lot more from you, the images look very promising!

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