I do believe I'm improving by SEspider
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In my coloring that is. :)
Anyway, thought I'll show an early process of an image I'm doing for when I FINALLY hit 500 post at DA. Thinking of having them standing in a Pond. What you all think?
Comments (5)
SEspider
Ah, NUTS! For some reason, it didn't load right. So the colors and stuff seem messed up. Sorry about that. Hopefully, it'll look better when I post the final.
mushypea
looks good to me. A pond would be a good idea, or maybe a mudpool, because their complextions seem a little dirty if you catch my drift ;-)
Juji
Good good. You have the base color with shadow and highlight. Very good. Now what you should do is put some pink tones in certain places. Elbows, fingers, cheeks, and shoulders all have little pink tones. Good job! :)
idrawstuff
very good - the light coming thru the tears on the top is excellent - her neck is a little funky - make the outside line of her neck come up and meet where her ear connects to her jaw - i think that would make it look more proportional.
SEspider
1drawstuff, Yeah, I noticed that after I posted this. Was kinda hoping no one would notice. Oh well. The back of the neck should be closer to the her head, but it still shouldn't connect at the base of her ear. Look at a bold person (male or female). The back of the starts to curve out at the ear. And with the neck posed like above, the skin would be streatched enough to make the apperance of a straight line. But you are right. It should be closer. Thanks.