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Lightwave Science Fiction posted on Mar 16, 2004
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An Aliens oriented WIP. Not happy with the lack of depth to this render.Any suggestions, depth of field maybe.

Comments (7)


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Sydney_Andrews

1:39AM | Wed, 17 March 2004

A little DOF would help. Also, I think you should un-center something and rotate the camera slightly as the image is to symmetrical. perhaps a view of the ground so that there may be something else to compare scale to. Other than that, everyhing else is top notch. i love the atmosphere and the texutres. All it needs is a little camera work:) Regards, E.

SeigMancer

2:44AM | Wed, 17 March 2004

excellent picture. I love the cheyenne dropship. keep up the good work.

longicolis

4:49AM | Wed, 17 March 2004

great model. i agree with the idea of changing the camera angle but i also think you might want to adjust the lighting so that the dropship becomes brighter than the background. the bright, crisp edges bring the background forward to much. hope it helps. keep em comming

Masta_bates

10:26AM | Thu, 18 March 2004

great image for the depth use photo shop-difuse

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Moebius87

8:39AM | Sun, 21 March 2004

You might also consider using distance fog to help reinforce the depth here. Very nicely done so far!

Cypris

5:25PM | Sun, 21 March 2004

I'd suggest a little more detail to the textures in the background. As is, the dropship is pretty high detail, but the background isn't in as high detail, making it not really match.

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ComplxMind

8:46PM | Thu, 25 March 2004

I'd go with the distance fog and a slight tilt of the camera to catch the shadows a little better. Excellent image and model!


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