My first waterfall by Saturnv

Terragen • Realism • posted on Mar 25, 2004

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This is my first time at trying to make a waterfall, so please give me some advice seen it looks crap. Advice appreciated:)

Comments (9)

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smiles95

1:08AM | Thu, 25 March 2004

The terrain in the background looks a little blurry. Perhaps you have the focus plugin enabled? Something that can help this a little is to open the image in Photoshop or paintshop pro and do a little image sharpening. Cascading water is a tricky thing. It's a great start!

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Micter

1:32AM | Thu, 25 March 2004

For a first time, you did it well ! I can't give you advice, because I can't do it my self (I must try this once !). I agree with smiles95 about the "blurry".

Saturnv

1:47AM | Thu, 25 March 2004

Thanks

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prutzworks

2:03AM | Thu, 25 March 2004

nice try, agree about unsharpness

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ShadowDN1

2:15AM | Thu, 25 March 2004

ist leider ein wenig verschwommen,aber sieht trotzdem sehr gut aus

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ariz

2:53AM | Thu, 25 March 2004

Excellent waterfall. Too bad about the focus, this would have been a great render...

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EoinArmstrong

5:44AM | Thu, 25 March 2004

It's a little blurry alright, but the basic compositing seems to fit the overall picture; nice water in the f/g

triplexxx

2:49PM | Thu, 25 March 2004

.:The blur wouldn't be bad if the foreground was also slightly blurred - now it looks like the waterfall & rocks have been stuck behind the water - however the image has a certain eye catching attraction 4 me - further work on it could prove satisfactory?:.

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PatGoltz

3:27AM | Tue, 30 March 2004

I think the main problem is the lack of focus on the cliffs and waterfall. But it's better than I could do at this point. I've been thinking about a way to do it, too. Also, you should consider issues of composition. The composition could be significantly improved.