table top by swimmerkitty14
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Description
WIP.
Please tell me how I can make this better,
thanks
Comments (6)
Abreu
This looks great already! But you can make the dark areas a bit brighter...
Varian
I like the collection of items, and the textures look good. The pencil appears to be seated in an ink bottle which is a bit incongruous, but perhaps that's how you want it to be. The block of sunlight hitting the wall upper right appears to be coming through a non-existent ceiling, so adding a ceiling to the model would block that bit. Then maybe hang something on the way in that area. Very pleasant composition, keep it coming!
Curious
looks really good =D
Minuano
I like it...it's a warm welcoming place for solitude...night or day.
fmtoffolo
softer shadows, look out for the shelf texture, but the rest is just great.
mowarin
looks ok, maybe the magnifier is a little too big and watch out for the dark areas they can be made lighter mowarin