40327-10 (Reworked 40317-8) by GreenSat
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Joan Dark Portrait (Reworked)
Several people made suggestions on 40317-8 that I took as a challenge.
1) Nose...Bad. Got rid of the outline and painted her a nose. Broadened the bridge of her nose slightly as well.
2) Hair too stiff...softened hair slightly by making it finer.
3) Nape of her Neck not finished...got rid of the lineart portion and simply painted her nape allowing for more shadow/light gradient.
Then there were a few things that I just didn't like.
4) Bad Teeth...added two teeth and straightened the rest. Removed the gaps.
5) Cheeks seemed to sag...raised cheeks slightly and added a hint of pink.
6) Cleft Chin Made her look stiff...Removed Cleft and rounded chin.
7) Too Many stars...Removed 2 stars from her choker cross as they were too deep into the shadow.
8) Adjusted lighting around mouth slightly.
9) Reduced Size for easier viewing.
Credits:
Wacom, PS7, "How to Draw Manga - Bodies and Anatomy"
Thanks for Viewing: Comments, Suggestions, & Constructive Criticism always welcome!
Comments (5)
SEspider
Congreatulations! the hair does look a lot softer and the neck looks Much better. Fixing the teeth help as well. The rest I thought was fine. But that's me. This looks Much better then the original. Well done!
shizuku
the lighz on her nose is sweet :) I liked her hair at first version too, but became better Little ask: You wanna draw realistic, or manga? Silly thing, but i can totally imagine her big, hanged ears, red nose, and bigger eyes. ah, no. You realistic.. but please try put white light in her eyes.. for more living :hug: was very neat surprise, you are better, and better
Cyve
Good ... very good my friend ... It's perfect !
Ethesis
I like the eyes, just bought our new car with that color because the color is just like my wife's eyes.
gallimel
it's beautiful to be back and see again your work dear :) Many hugs, Meli :)