Short Story by strip_mobius
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Description
A woman goes downstairs, sees a monster, screams, then runs away.
JOE--
Comments (6)
Rohyphnol
i like the concept...if you didnt add so many fonts everywhere i would like it alot more..
strip_mobius
this has only two fonts, CasablanqeAntique and Arial.
akrilico
Agree with Rohyphnol. Try it with different fonts (and maybe less text). I don' t think that casablanca antique is the right 1 for this. Also try without the texture on the background. :-)
strip_mobius
without texture it appears incomplete. Which font would you suggest, I chose Casablanque Antique for it's rustic quality to give the impression that this is an old story told time and again. To specifically contrast with the bright modern color choice.
Lonifer
hey joe! Love this concept. The whole thing to me is put together wondefully. THE ONLY thing I personally would chamge would be the grey text. I would make it just a tad darker because it tends to blend in when it hits the back ground and over the "screams" icon. Other than that it is okie dokie!:) (p.s. I still wanna stone the world!)
Varian
This is so very innovative and certainly tells the story, many times. Well done! :)