silent scream by erosiaart
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The silent scream.
Pregnant, no where to go. Not a child she needed. Not a girl. "Get rid of it!" her mind screamed. "She'll only cause problems! Dowry! Won't look after you when you old! Why have her? Throw her out!"
And in her womb, came a silent scream not heard to her, or anyone else in the world that was alive.
weeping willow and sunflower frm 3d cafe free models.
Comments (6)
AgentSmith
I like the grasping but just out of reach, it drives the point of the picture. Glad to see your stalk came out, and no your artwork is not too dark, (just right for me)!
mrscience
Very good - just a few suggestions: 1. changing the haze to be a little darker to match the rest of the sky a little more realistically. 2. Putting some more shadows on the weeping willow, sunflower, and arm. 3. If possible smoothing the arm a bit to get rid of that middle line. I'm sorry if it sounds cynical to suggest so much like this, but this artwork has real promise to it if you can get the technical stuff like that worked out. Keep working on it and you could have a masterpiece. Happy rendering!
Colette1
I really like this picture. I agree with the suggestions made by mrscience. This picture already tells a big story though. Keep it up.
erosiaart
thanks everyone..will work on it... and then put it up again... mrscience..you don't sound cynical..the more critics i get on this..the better! :)
Mondwin
excellent artwork!!bravo!!vote:DD
skiwillgee
Wow, I vote excellent, not on technical stuff but because of the words and thought you just slammed home. Yes, yes cry for those who can't be heard.