Billiard by misiopuchatek
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Description
One of my works in 3D Studio Max 6.0.
I'm working in this program for about 2 week so images may be a little weird ;)
Waiting for comments, suggestions, critics and whatever You want :)
Rendered in 18m 46s on Pentium III 500MHz 128MB RAM and Riva TNT.
Comments (8)
Meyrink
Molto bravo, complimenti!!!
Viperrider
not bad, but the balls are x-mas-like...too high reflection and too glossy...try some values out...
XKILLAX
THe pool table definently needs a texture!! other then that it looks good
nTa
most polished, reflective pool balls ever. You sure know how to keep ur balls clean.
GOD___
Yep, like the others said the balls are very clean looking, imperfections are what make 3d look real. Use a dirt map, scuffs or something to break up the surface. Put a nice soft texture on the table, but again shows a little bit of wear, just unevenness in the felt from the balls rolling over it. One other thing is your shadows, they are very diffused, indoor lighting will generally give you harder edged shadows, also is looks like you have only light source, in a bar/pub you're going to have more then one light source creating multiple shadows. I feel kinda bad saying all that, for two weeks you are doing REALLY good though, I don't know if I could pull off this image as I myself have never used HDRI. Anyways, your image is still very good, and I don't mean to discourage at all. Awsome start, love to see you push it that little further.
TheGreatGrizz
What got my attention here is the reflection of the balls ! So shinny ! I've never seen so clean balls ! It makes the picture cool to watch. I like the mirror effect on the balls, seing the windows... It is true that this picture does not look very real, but you did accomplish a big step in 2 weeks. I wish I could see them animated ! Gives me the feel of pool ! I'm gonna play pool next weekend I think and I'm gonna think of your render. You are better than me ! Excellent work !
Musart
Great render of www.the123d.com HDRI Tutorial. I tried it and got great results too ! Keep on the good work.
misiopuchatek
Yep I know they're too clean but hey !! It was just a play :D And GOD___ don't feel sorry. I know it isn't perfect. And what would I become without any critics ;) Thank You for Your comments, and waiting for more :D