Dusk by the Lakeside by Crimmy

Poser • Portraits • posted on Apr 29, 2004

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This is my first attempt at posting anything anywhere. I have been trying and learning Poser 5 since the 12th of March since losing my job, and this is the first thing I thought it was time to start posting so I might start learning from the criticisms of the more learned 3-D artists. I'm not an artist, but I'm trying! I used Terragen to create my own background, Kozaburo's hair, and a prop called "Hippie Top" which I cannot remember where I got it, but Thank You to everyone! Anyway, my first post is here and I would appreciate your comments and criticism.

Comments (6)

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mapps

9:16PM | Thu, 29 April 2004

Very nice, but I would ad a dim ling in front of low values with no shadow to give a little ambient lighting in front. This would wash down the shadows a little and make the image a little softer which would be my preferance. :-)

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summer1412

9:44PM | Thu, 29 April 2004

For a first try, very good! I've seen PLENTY worse, LOL! Em...maybe start working on the transmaps for the eyelashes and eyebrows.

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Crimmy

6:12PM | Mon, 28 June 2004

It was supposed to be ambient light from a candle or party lights or something, with the atmospheric light in the background.

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CarolSassy

10:05AM | Thu, 01 July 2004

Very subtle, lovely picture. Really enjoy the muted background to let the model have control of the view. Great shading on her as well. Fantastic beginning! (:

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Keiyentai_Yotaiya

6:57PM | Sun, 18 July 2004

For a first try this is verry nice. Keep going at it.

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pangor

10:56PM | Sun, 27 November 2005

I know that you have progressed from the time that you first posted this image; however, I hope you won't mind a few pointers. I will view them in the order that you posted them. -- -- This is a great first posting, I love the way you textured her hair. Main point of possible improvement is her eyes. They are an example the "dead eyes" of Poser. You can fix that by adding a little ambience and/or translucency to the eyewhite and iris textures.