Alice (version 3) by Amuzani
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OK...cooler fill lights in the background, warmer main light, a few new fill lights...what do you think?
Every time I adjust things I find new shadows being cast throught the light gel...I sort of like the shadow pattern in this one better.
Again..please comment! Thanks!
Comments (4)
mvzear
Really like his face, any way you can make his anteni look less like bent pins?
balistic
This is really feeling like a patch of sunlight now, good work! I can only spot two things I would change: A - Alice's hand gesture isn't very dynamic . . . unless they're trying, a person will rarely line up all their fingers like that. Try reaching for an imaginary toadstool yourself and note what kind of position your fingers take. B - the little lensflare on the Hookah looks out of place because there's not a specular highlight there that's bright enough to cause it. Either add a bright highlight there in a paint program, or lose the lensflare. Otherwise, this is looking very nice . . . I like it a lot.
Meowsy
Wow! great image. the only thing i see that could be changed is: In the book alice was i little girl. in this, she looks 19 or 20. just a sudgestion thoug, still a great image!
jimstein
Dont forget that leaves make shadows in the forest. There should be irregular lightspots.