I wish I'd known by LadyTieryn
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Tears flow freely
Up from hell's gates.
Tears for you, I've shed so much.
Lakes of fire, made up of them.
Lovers tears fell from above.
Always hurting,
Heart was aching.
Trying to prove my love to you.
Loved you so much
Heart was braking
Wanted free from my own hell.
Pill a plenty I had before me.
Knives had cut my skin so deep.
Now the pain I had in heaven,
Always here I'll have to keep.
Tears flow freely down around me.
Tears from you........ I wish I'd known.
You did love me, in our heaven
You did love me, I wish I'd known.
Comments (5)
vlaaitje
very touching poem.....I like it I am a poet too.....
roadrunner69
Excellent work!
meico
You have made your torment very clear with your choice of words, and I think it was very wise to hint of suicidal thoughts rather than [as some writers do] flood the poem with gore and angst. Your more subtle approach is much better.
LadyTieryn
Thank you for the kind words. You are all wonderful writers I've read many of your works, so to have compliments from you means a lot to me. Again, Thank you. ~Sonya
pscott
Wonderful poem. It flowed so well, and with perfect emotion. The pain was evident. Very well done.