TREE-3 by cannonn

Vue • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Jun 10, 2004

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Please give me adovice.

Comments (4)

airlynx

11:44AM | Thu, 10 June 2004

Well I don't know Vue, but I can say that the bird looks a little large and the back tire of the bicycle looks stuck in the ground. I happen to like the simplicity of the overall scene, but the swingset looks too simple. Otherwise, its very good.

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Sylvia

11:58AM | Thu, 10 June 2004

I find it ~~Peaceful & Beautiful~~ GREAT composition!!

BigGreenFurryThing

12:21PM | Thu, 10 June 2004

This is quite different from your other stuff. It's quite an unnerving picture because it's ever so slightly surreal. Not sure if that was intentional but I rather like it! You've obviously got the hang of placing objects. I would suggest cutting down on the number of objects in the scene but put something in the mid ground, between the mountains and the tree. Also experiment with the Atmosphere Editor to make the tree stand more. Above all work out what you're trying to achieve with the composition: what's the main object? and how can it be emphasised with placement, lighting, etc.?

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cannonn

10:01AM | Fri, 11 June 2004

Thank you for a very good advice There is it. I study. airlynx AND Sylvia AND BigGreenFurryThing