Gives you everything you need... by true_mice
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Hi There!
I had been so busy lately, that I didn't had the time to do as I promised. Hope you didn't all forget about me. Even if, it ain't sooo bad.
This is a picture I had to do for a commercial-pacshot in terms of my studies. I thought I could chare it with all for you and get some remarks.
So, go ahead leave me a message and than a could improve it and get a better mark. *smile*
Well, Thanks.
Susann
Comments (3)
bluliner35
As an art director, I'd have to say the highlights are blown out and it's a little too dark on top. I'm not so crazy about the color, either. Something interesting going on with the approach. I'd say try to get more power out of it. Maybe try a less dramatic angle, maybe horizontal is a bolder statement. Or maybe try a more dramatic angle, tighter and more abstract. I'm not so sure this shows the product to it's best advantage. Hope that helps.
true_mice
yes...thank you... tomorrow I'll upload a new one. See if it's better.
raven_nightmares
although I'm not an art director, I must say I rather like this. I think the most important thing to get clear is the name, which is. I do, however, think that a clear and simple vertical composition might help (and give added space for any slogan/info/etc.