Lies by WhispersSoft
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Lies
Tonight I thought my dream was real
I smiled and felt loved
Sensed you was near
Felt the warmth of your hand
I heard the promises over and over
But again tonight I cry
For now I see the lies
Coldness is what I feel
A dieing love is what
Comments (3)
roadrunner69
"Never more to smile For tonight I died with a lie" .... well done work! .... methinks tonight you awakened to the truth? .... and that soon you 'will' be smiling?
CarolSassy
This is so beautiful. Hope you aren't really sad though. Miss seeing you around! (:
meico
A succinct little piece of poetry which does just enough to show your depth of feeling. This is a sweet sadness, in some ways - your words have honeyed the gall.