Fortress (WIP) by mechmorph
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Sorry for the large file. One of my works in progress. I'm a bit stumped with this one. It needs something, but I'm not sure what, so I'm soliciting suggestions. Thanks.
Comments (4)
bloodstone
I think the piece is very nice! I think the composition is a little off. The hill in the foreground draws too much attention to your eye. The mountain on the right is fantastic!
Viciousman
Very nice sky and water
redneck
Composition is fine; the details in the left foreground are a nice touch. The eye moves from lower left to upper right, but if you think the foreground detail is distracting just flip the image. The the hill will stop the eye wandering off the scene at lower right. The cliffs are too vertical. Either make the cliffs less severe or place some rocks (pieces of the cliffs) in the water. In any case the transition to water is too abrupt - need rocks or a beach there. What is that dark shadow on the right of the image?
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Composition is fine; the details in the left foreground are a nice touch. The eye moves from lower left to upper right, but if you think the foreground detail is distracting just flip the image. The the hill will stop the eye wandering off the scene at lower right. The cliffs are too vertical. Either make the cliffs less severe or place some rocks (pieces of the cliffs) in the water. In any case the transition to water is too abrupt - need rocks or a beach there. What is that dark shadow on the right of the image?