Retro style by bazze
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Description
I'm finished with the modeling but not quite happy with the composition - suggestions most welcome!
The lamp is based on a IKEA lamp from last years collection. The armchair to the left is totally made up and the smaller chair to the right is based on an unknown piece of furniture a have at home.
Comments (7)
lahavana
well, although, as u said, the composition is not quite a happy choice, i must congratulate u on your excellent modelling and texturing. as for the composition - wouldn't it be better if the lamp (a vertical dominant) be placed rather besides and a little behind (but not completely behind) the armchair? the way it is now, placed in front, it takes away the glamour of the furniture. Just an opinion :) anyway, u got great skill with C4D
Curious
great render 8D
Incarnadine
A well modelled scene indeed. The problem is the lamp pulls the eye direct to the center, if you try to offset it a bit, when it pulls they eye, the eye will cross the scene more
bazze
I have nog changed the composition a bit.. moved the lamp back and added a 3rd chair.
Beanzvision
This looks great, very nice feel. The curtain rods seem unsettling tho! Maybe a bit thick? Or it's me but nice :)
jmbwalsh
The composition implys something either has or will happen. This has the feel of film noir, keep up the good work.
strata
Leave the composition as it is, its excellent. I agree with jmbwalsh, it implys something either has or will happen. Vote! :)) Strata