Departure by fantasy2
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I am screaming in the dark
I can't feel my soul, I bleed
I do not see even a spark
There?s no hope for me to live
OH, I long for my own place
How I've prayed for my relief
There are shadows of disgrace
There's no hope for me to live
Giving up, remainder air
There's no longer too much strength
Now, it's moment to despair
There's no hope for me to live
Between screams and painful weeps
I can see the road to death
There's a hole, so dark and deep
Now, I'll give up on my breath
You won't reach me anymore
But I'll keep beholding you
With black wings, I'll learn to soar
In the night, I'll touch your moon
It's your moon, it's a gift
It's an ask for your forgiveness
All those times we both had drift
Now, replaced by loneliness
It all ends right here, right now
I am sorry for this pain, but I don't deserve to live
My feet just can't touch your ground
I'll be far away from here, but I'll meet you in your dreams
Comments (4)
atom80
This piece is beautiful because it is very powerful and filled with intense emotions. hugs
roadrunner69
Well done .... "When you learn how to die, then you'll learn how to live" (from the book, "Tuesdays with Morrie by Mitch Albom" - two years on the besteller list).
Wolfspirit
Yes intense emotion here, as I am a strong believer in writing and sharing pains of any kind, pains of others, our own personal pains, as that is what is sometimes needed as it takes the screaming to the world for the overwhelming pain inside to be free of the chains of despair and loss of hope for one to begin to grow to heal, get out from under the sorrow and the stress life sometimes brings upon our doorsteps for many reasons. As we reach, out with our words into the unknown the uncharted waters of our existence, sometimes finding a hand there to greet us and hold us up, and sometimes not, but not always needed the hand. Just the voice within us the words on paper, black on white, so that we may open the doorway of our inner cages freeing the demons of hurt. Excellent work! Keep writing!
meico
A harrowing emotion-packed poem full of dark energy and pain. The note of hopelessness is continued throughout the piece and gives it a certain unity of purpose.But above all it's honest and direct. vote