Reality by BlueLotus7
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I have
loved you
from afar
for what seems
an eternity.
You are my fantasy
although real
to others.
My soul is bound
by chains
of morals.
How long can this
flame of love
burn
before being consumed
by this isolated darkness
called self-control?
Constraint's talons are ripping
the thin veil of my sanity
until only a shadow remains.
But I continue to smile
from afar for what seems...an eternity...
You are my fantasy
although real
to others.
Comments (42)
Diandra
Oh goodness, very emotive! Beautiful piece.
whitestorm
Awesome Poem.Ver beautiful!
chucksiebuhr
Hauntingly beautiful and introspective. You have the enviable gift of conveying mood and atmosphere in such a way that each can relate to it on a personal level...be it the present, or in some distant memory. Wonderful work, indeed!
SimplySerendipity
Well-written piece of work. Very evocative. :)
beetle-car
I like this! An very emotionally charged piece of writing. Thanks for sharing!
Sylvia
Soft, Melancholic and Beautifulwords that touch the Heart!! AWESOME Poetry... ExcellentEngel47
Excellent work. Beautiful haunting words.
goddesspanda
Beautiful, deep and full of meaning. Very nice!
digi-b
Artist, writer and now a poet. Your really amazing. This is a very haunting and beautiful poem.
Metonicus
Wow, similar to Drache I think in the emotions it portrays. Both glad and sorrowful that I'm not the only one treading that ocean.
burke_2815
makes me think of the feeling of the skin burning with pain when you live these situations, very intense poem
cannonn
Excellent poem, Wonderful!!!!.