Lent Heart by fantasy2
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I remember the day that you held me
You told me I was the one flower,
Your love, would be able to save me
In my eyes, there was some kind of power
And so, I gave myself to you
And lent my body and heart
My soul, became castle to you
Together, we drifted apart
Why did you steal all my strength?
And then, made me feel so ashamed?
You stole every dream of my mind
And took away all my inside
You need to give me back my heart
I need it to be back the same
My thorns became my sword
I
Comments (4)
BlueLotus7
Very powerful words of a person taking back their life!! Excellent!!
zoku01
Heartbreaking. But I see a light and it will give you strength and confidence. Beautiful poetry.
meico
You have an obvious inner strength, you express your feelings clearly and comprehensively and you hold your reader's attention throughout. In other words: great stuff!
roadrunner69
Superbly written! .... another life lesson learned and explained.