Sat, Nov 30, 2:52 PM CST

Become

Writers (none) posted on Jul 31, 2004
Open full image in new tab Zoom on image
Close

Hover over top left image to zoom.
Click anywhere to exit.


Members remain the original copyright holder in all their materials here at Renderosity. Use of any of their material inconsistent with the terms and conditions set forth is prohibited and is considered an infringement of the copyrights of the respective holders unless specially stated otherwise.

Description


I am here. I live. I love. I hate. I fear. I am among the many. A little speckle of nothing in this grand world of ours. I am one and all. I am nothing. I see you. I hear your thoughts. You can not hide. I am everywhere. My power will consume you. My lust will ravage you. My strength will overcome you. Beware, I am near. You will never be the same. I will posses your soul. I will infect your mind. Never to let go. You will be mine. My power will grow. My strength will become stronger. You will not be able to stop me. I am near. Your mind is confused. I will make you understand. Your body, nothing but a shell. I will fill it. You are weak. I will make you strong. You can not see. I will make you see. Beware, I am near. Feel the air. What do u feel? Dread? Power? Lust? What? Do you feel anything? No, but you shall. I will make you feel. I am near. Feel me. I am close. Feel my power. Feel the lust that runs through me. Feel the heat that consumes me. Feel the passion that entraps my heart. Feel me. Beware, I am here. I stand to you. What do you see? Light? Dark? Sun? Moon? Feel my presence. Am I not powerful? Can you feel me, filling you? Are you beginning to understand? Are you beginning to see? Can you feel your blood bubble as the heat runs through you? Sense the strength I give you. I am here. Ah... I hear you. What am I? I am everything. I am nothing. I am passion. I am power. I am the heat that runs through your loins. I am within and I am without. I am that what you fear and that what you love. I am here. Yes, I am here. I have arrived. I feel your dreams. I feel your fears. I know your thoughts. Oh and what thoughts you have. How? Why? Because I can. You can not stop me. Don't try. Your soul is mine. Your mind gone. You are me and I am you. Your shell is now full. Do not fight. I am within. I have taken your soul and devoured. Your mind, lost in many. Feel the passion that I give you. Feel the strength you now have. See through your new sight. Understand. I am within. Ah... You still fight. Why? I will never understand. I have given you sight, strength,power and passion. But you still fight me. Why? It is useless. I am here. I will remain. Your body is mine. Enjoy my gift. It may not last. You will become. I feel your sorrow. I have no need. It shall be consumed. I am passion and power. I have given them to you. Sorrow is nothing. Use the strength. Accept me. You will become. Relinquish yourself to me. Become. Savor the passion and the heat. Feed off the lust. Live by it. It is there for you. A gift. You will become. Con you feel it? The fire running through you. Consuming you. Feel the power overtaking you. Look..see ? Feel the lust. Feed it. Feed the lust that is controlling you. Loose control. It must be fed. Devour and take in. Feel the warmth. Ah.. you are strong. I still sense you. Repulsed? You have fed the lust. The passion is next. You are becoming. The passion with entrap your heart. It must be fed. It will suffocate your heart. You will die. Passion is what I am. It must be fed. It tastes so wonderful. Feed it. And I give you my gift , forever. You are becoming. Look.. There. Can you smell it? Can you feel it? Raw, but there. The heat running through. Tainted passion, but passion. Use it, make it yours. Yes, there. Feel it through you. Yes, take it, make it yours. The passion is overwhelming. The heat growing hotter. Feel it, the power, the strength, the lust and passion. Use it. Desire it. Take it. Use my gift. Live for it. You have become. and I will let you keep it. *** I posted this in a series with pictures over in the poser gallery couple weeks ago.. was told by many people to put it in the writers area as well .. so I am .. I wrote this about 5 years ago, after my ex up and moved out one day while I was at work.***

Comments (12)


Shakti27

11:15PM | Sat, 31 July 2004

very kewl and very empowering S love the prose hun S it went with your series very well too :)

)

BlueLotus7

11:16PM | Sat, 31 July 2004

Oh, girl! I remember this series and loved it them! Had to copy/paste them all to one document to keep on my desktop and here you've finally brought it all together!! Great job!! Glad to see another artist in the writer's area!!

)

SK2Design

11:19PM | Sat, 31 July 2004

This is an absolutely incredible piece! I feel the raw emotion, the power of one being taken over against their will. You've manipulated the words in such a way to make them work so beautifully to convey emotion. Awesome writing, and I'm so glad you've shared it! (((HUGS)))

)

SophiaDeer

11:43PM | Sat, 31 July 2004

Lovely work!!

)

Elfenone

12:22AM | Sun, 01 August 2004

Very powerful piece! It sure got a lot of emotion out of you..and it's very mysterious as well. It gave something to those images. Not that they needed anything..they were lovely

)

B_PEACOCK

5:45PM | Sun, 01 August 2004

WOW Such power and emotion in your writing here .Excellent !!!!!!!

)

jwdell

12:20PM | Mon, 02 August 2004

Awesome!!!!!!!!

roadrunner69

12:44PM | Mon, 02 August 2004

This piece made me feel, think, and remember .... excellent!

nolegirl

12:51AM | Tue, 03 August 2004

Very well done!! =)

)

Armorbeast

4:15PM | Tue, 03 August 2004

I think its beautiful girl...great words and I can tell they mean't a lot when you wrote them~that scum:)

ann0314

8:38PM | Fri, 06 August 2004

Well...it's about time LMAO....EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT :O) :O) :O) and you know what I am gonna say next :O) ...... VOTE

)

meico

6:13AM | Sat, 07 August 2004

Very interesting sequence indeed. I read it three times [not usual for me] and gained more each reading - a good sign of deep and thought-provoking writing. I hope you will contribute regularly to the Writers Gallery .. I for one would like to read more. Mike


0 183 0

Privacy Notice

This site uses cookies to deliver the best experience. Our own cookies make user accounts and other features possible. Third-party cookies are used to display relevant ads and to analyze how Renderosity is used. By using our site, you acknowledge that you have read and understood our Terms of Service, including our Cookie Policy and our Privacy Policy.