~~Celestial Ride~~ by Blush
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I fly in my dream to a midnight star
And swing on a radiant moonbeam
I laugh as I soar past pleiades far
And drink from the Milky Way stream~
I ride on a crested cloud of the heavens
And float on playgrounds of blue
I gaze at the spectral of star-spangled space
And bathe in the night-filled dew~
My earth-tied self is released in my dream
For a moment of magical flight
Unbound by gravitous earthly domain
I move in raptured delight~
Comments (24)
vjerana
I just love your poem! Excellent done and very nice presentation!!!*
BlueLotus7
Let's hear it for astral travel!! Bravo!! I love the description of freedom from physical limitations!!
Hyria
Oooohhh lovely poem and graphic :)
susanmoses
Fantastic rhyming and rhythm of words!
sheilakalajdzic
oooh...just delightful words that have me imagining a world of magical play in the midst of our galaxy & beyond. i can just imagine myself swinging from moonbeam to moonbeam! Such happiness!!! vote!
DennisReed
Absolutely delightful poem Susan! Bravo!
katili
Absolutely a fantastic ride ! I love it !
RobertTheoret
Great photo and great poem. Weldone. BRAVOS!!!
wildfire2003
This is just so wonderful, as delightful a trip to read as it would be to dream! Excellent!!V
stevermstrong
A really wonderful poem....kudos to you and thanks for the vivid visions you placed in my mind..such a delight.
romanceworks
Your "Celestial Ride" takes me on a wonderful trip through space, with such freedom. That's how creating feels ... sometimes. Fantastic poem and image to match. Excellent. And a vote. :o) CC
cynlee
beautifully written & imagined!! you excel in your poems! wonderful image to accompany it too :]
meico
A lovely 'flight of fantasy' indeed ... such escapist episodes are so necessary and so enjoyable. Thanks, Susan, for sharing this. Mike
Elfenone
Wow what a dreamy poem! IT's very sweet and light.. and just perfect with the image! Perfect meter too if I may add. That's a talent.. not forced at all. Bravo!
ObsidianLogic
wonderful
SerenityBlue
Beautiful beautiful! As always... come see my Tahoe pictures! We just returned from a week at Lake Tahoe. We had great fun. Love ya, hun! ~Charlene
roadrunner69
Somewhere, the late Timothy Leary is 'galactically' smiling at your piece .... excellent!
airlynx
It seems like a walk on the astral plane, always wonderful.
Jalen
how ive so missed reading ur writings..its so descriptive and even if we didnt have the image we would still b able to envision the ride in our heads..outstanding sweetie..Love ya and have missed ya...HLNGB2YNYLO...L;)))
danob
Another wonderful poem if it were not for the celestial connotations would make an ode for a butterfly
madame
So beautifully written, Susan ! I have no gift for the writing that is why I admire so much your talent... Excellent ++ !!
fantasy2
Perfect!! I think I'm your fan, Blush!! lol Vote
avalonfaayre
LOL! Yep, sounds Astral to me, too! I love it, and I love the accompanying image! Bravo!
Chipka
This is amazing! I love a good interstellar trip and this is as good as they come! Wonderful writing and I really like the pace; it's nice and has sort of a trotting pace to it...well, more of a canter: it's bouncy but not too fast. That's just how I like it. Wonderful work! You write marvelously.