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Silent Killer

Writers (none) posted on Aug 16, 2004
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i wanted to make an image to go with this, but my meager skills failed me fairly miserably... i wrote it a few days ago. -------------------------- I wreak havoc And despair End your lives Without a care I will gladly Slit your throat To the ocean Sink your boat I don't care About your fame I don't even Know your name I attack From within Eat you through And leave your skin Cause you pain Cause you death I will steal Your last breath Once inside You are mine Feel me crawling Up your spine Lay waste To your mind Make you suffer Death unkind Try to run You will see You can't run Away from me -------------------------- apparently the kind of cancer my father has is named 'silent killer' by doctors, because by the time you realize it's there you're pretty much on an irreversible path to the grave. a cruel creation of nature it is indeed...

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AusPoet

2:56PM | Mon, 16 August 2004

I'm terribly sorry to hear avbout your father, RaysofLight. It must be a terrible thing you and your family are going through. All the best. The rhythm of this is like that of a train, and I was hard put to stop myself from accelerating the rhythm in my head as I read on. I was going to suggest that the addition of some emotion would add some more promise to it, and then thought about the current calculated coldness of it and realised that this is the perfect expression of a cold callous cancer. A clever depiction of a very frightening thing. It has grown on me more with each re-read.

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BlueLotus7

5:47PM | Mon, 16 August 2004

My sincerest wishes for you to receive strength to give your father as well as to carry you through a dire situation. Caregiving is done from the heart but can tear it out also. I feel your hatred and bitterness come through at the injustice of it all...so sorry...keep strong.

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Calseeor

5:24AM | Tue, 17 August 2004

Im very sorry to hear the news. I wish your father, your family and yourself all the best.


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