One Step Beyond... by shortgrey
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One step beyond, we're now in the forbidden zone. You can still see the crack from another point of view. In front, some distance away on the left where we pitched our base camp, is the owl hill with his stunning uncommon nature : one eye and a half of a mouth are visible. My assistant scientist, 'Chat', says :"it is cursed", and all of a sudden, an appalling howling came from that point...we all had gooseflesh...but nowhere to hide...with a shaking hand, i managed to call my friends at the base...shortgrey to the base...can you hear me?...shortgrey to the base...is anybody still alive ????YE...TI......YE.....TI....Chris, Eduardo, Cynlee, what's up there ???? shortgrey to the base...Is anybody listenin ??? shortgrey to the base......YE...TI......YE...TI.........contact lost...then it was true...it was true...(to be continued)
Comments (18)
Odrah
the contrast between the image and the text results in a very thrilling sensation...i almost cant breathe!!! uve done another masterpiece...i really admire ur work!
cockjuice
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! oh, oops, I tripped on a fallen stake and kicked a rock with my frozen foot. Not to mention I have this frikin goose flesh with no feathers and a Yeti is coming. Sorry, in denial, all my life a Yeti, yes a yeti? And I'm not ready? Oh but I am, I think. . .Let's Go!
Keiyentai_Yotaiya
I love the way you make snow scenes. They are so calm yet have so much power to them. I love them.
chat
i think i am lost or dead, maybe to be revived as an undead .... what comes next? you make amazing texture to show what was there but is not there
cynlee
hey chris... wonder what happened to shortgrey... shouldn't he have been back by now?... hope he hasn't fallen in a crevice... or, or... worse! :/ eeeeee... ok... now i'm spooked :]
Buzzzzz
Bravo! Looks real.
gunsan
Again a faint light that creates magic with this God-forgiven landscape. Those wandering there needs hope. You create your snowy landscapes so alive that I can go there in my mind, and to me it is a frightening hopeless wandering. Well, let's se how your story continurs...
EoinArmstrong
Great mood/atmo again; nice snow
bruno021
XLT snow surfaces, super atmo, the lighting is so unusual, like the day or night will never come!
pclavett
Realiste et l'ambiance est extraordinaire ! Bravo Guillaume ! Belle histoire en passant !!!
Petra-S
Again such a beautiful winter picture! I like this tendency! Well made!
inkydigit
story + scene = perfect blend, excellent work!!:)
me109
Agree with inkydidgit! Waiting for more :)
Hyria
Whohoo Very cool and excellent image. As for the narrative...I'm waiting for to be continued. :) Got me hooked me friend :)
sossy
LOL it sounds like "Rammstein": play a play with me! Chat was so afraid, that he was fallen in a black hole that opened before his feet. Ok, maybe it's true....only an unreal silent was left...and the fear about that what will come out of the white darkness.....
Michelle A.
You have a wonderful imagination! Following the story with anxiety!
Tedz
Cynlee will save You...She saves everyone! Stay warm:]
Enmos
LOL Hey if we all fight together we can beat the Yeti im sure... hmm where did i come from actually ? lol i must have come out of that blackhole Chat disapeared into :D hehe Awesome story, i'll look at the follow up !!