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About a man

Writers Romance posted on Aug 23, 2004
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He whispers his feelings He touches me tenderly He shows me the meanings He loves me softly He dives inside me With words and caress He is every part of me My dreams, he can guess and possess I can

Comments (4)


NVJasmin

7:10AM | Tue, 24 August 2004

love the poem you really rock at this.

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meico

8:14AM | Tue, 24 August 2004

A tender little love poem. I would consider shortening the second line in the fourth stanza to maintain the rhythm of the rest. Good work!

Rudinside

10:36PM | Tue, 24 August 2004

Oi meu anjo!... Quem seria esse "man"? Quero um desses pra mim! Beijinhos minha linda! to com saudadezinhas de vc...

Hermione84

3:07PM | Wed, 25 August 2004

Hello!!! I loved your poem, I really think you're very good at it!!! Congratulations!! I want to read more of them! Kisses!


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