My last prayer by fantasy2
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I can't take this anymore
No one ever hears my weep
No one ever fills me deep
No one keeps my heart secure
I can't face this destiny
There's no hope to hold on to
There's no hands to reach out to
There's nobody that can hear
I wont spend here one more minute
Won't say one more word about these lies
I giving up on my spirit
Letting my heart and body die
Wait a second, let me finish
I need to tell my last prayer
Before i close my eyes and vanish
Hear my whispers and my breath
Please forgive all my mistakes
All my fights against your love
I have doubt about your grace
And in heaven, I don't deserve a place
Keep safe my last words
Comments (8)
xceiverx
There's always hope :)
SeigMancer
Very nice prayer.
Hermione84
It's a little sad, but very beautiful!! :-) Congratulations...
meico
Heartfelt and simultaneously heart-rending little prayer. But I still say Hope's best. Take care, Mike
pigtailsoup
take heart that you're not the only one who feels that way.
AusPoet
No matter what, hope is never lost and life is never over as long as there is still a part of you that wants things to be better. Please believe that if you are willing to keep on trying, you can improve your situation.
vscott1620
Perfect, Perfect, I love this. Do More. Vanessa
loswl_
Great poetic prayer..nicely done!!!+++