Down by the Water by Archanejill
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Description
Gabby challenged me to something -- my first go at it, but i think i can make it better. just don't know how. any comments on making it better, lemme know :) lyrics are poe and pj harvey.
Comments (7)
OpenMindDesign
I like it, it is sort of weird...she looks sad, I cannot read the words though...but I think thats cos I haven't got me specs on...ho ho Nice pic
Cheryle
what don't you like about it? and how do you mean make it better? i like the way it looks...
Archanejill
something about her face... it bothers me slightly.. don't know if it's too bright or what... hmm.
define
I think she's fine... maybe some highlights to the wings to make them match her would help.
Antoonio
Dont change the face, its really good as it is. Beautiful, but bit haunting. I agree define, the wings does not fit. I dont know, is it just me, and you have the batwings-idea there, but angel wings would be way much better... 2d-angel wings from photo of doll or drawing, yeah, I would do that. Rest of the pic, I dig.
archetype
Batwings would work (if that's what you want) but you need a better texture and have the lighting match her a little better. The washed out brightness on her face is perfect IMO.
tieri
fait longtemps que je n'ai pas vu ta gallery pardonne moi!pour l'imagge le concept est tres sympa j'ai l'impression qu'il y a plus de maturite dans tes montages, le travail y est equilibre les contrastes plus present et l'ambiance est forte, me fait un peu penser a certaines chansons d'anathema.bravo!!