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Prisoner of My Pain, Captive of My Chains

Writers Romance posted on Sep 11, 2004
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Prisoner of My Pain, Captive of My Chains Your beauty stings like a whip, Your eyes burn like fire, Your skin is so soft It crushes my soul. Your hair so fiery It blinds my eyes. Your lips so tender They fill me with pain. For you sit so distant And so comforted Surrounded by others

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AusPoet

3:47PM | Sat, 11 September 2004

I think this is beautifully tragic, and it really reminded me of all the angsty feelings that tend to exist in teenagers... AND adults. :) Nice job, thanks for sharing it.

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BlueLotus7

9:19AM | Tue, 14 September 2004

I don't see a stalker here, I see a romantic shy young man who adores his love from a distance! Superb writing for one so young! I love the line "Your beauty stings like a whip"...oh, yes...I've known this...

efry_e

4:01AM | Wed, 15 September 2004

Wow... this is really.. almost made me cry. Why do we love our chains? The remind us of what we used to feel. Better feel pain than feel nothing sometimes.

LadyAya

9:23PM | Fri, 17 September 2004

So sad and beautiful. Thank you for sharing this part of your life....

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Moebius87

6:39AM | Sun, 17 October 2004

You write beautifully. Tortured prose need not get misinterpreted as a stalker's credo.


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