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I've finished up to page 9. so i'll be uploading one more tomorrow
Comments (2)
mmitchell_houston
Very, very good. The images are very well done(too dark for my taste, but that's just a personal preference). However, your transition between panels 2 and 3 doesn't quite work because you change the direction the sniper is shooting in panel 3. In every other panel on the page, the sniper is to the right and the target to the left. By switching the angle in panel 3, you disrupt the continuity of the storytelling and actually break the tension you've built. If you saw this in a movie, you'd see it more clearly. Otherwise, a very interesting tale, so far!
Ariah
Great effect on the breaking glass! I agree with mmitchel houston on the continuity - changing sides drops the tension. But the tale is very interesting and I'd need to put it into my favourites;) not to miss an episode...