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Dark temptation Original

Writers Story/Sequential posted on Sep 23, 2004
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I sat back in your dark room The full moon softened the room with its light blue rays. Staring at you as you take off your clothes like a snake shedding its' skin. You didn't know I was there... but you could feel me... tempting me with your soft movements, inviting me into your world. The arousing deep red color of the hot fluid running under your skin tempted me to go inside of you in a way that humans can never understand. I... I .. couldn't resist. The scent of it.. so sweet. I drew closer to you, and then you looked at me. Your dark eyes deep into mine. "Take me" You said softly "Drink it and feel my life, feel my passions, my hurt, my lust.. my everything" The sweet scent caught me, and my hunger grew bigger. I could no longer resist. I moved softly your silky hair with my fingertips.. reminding myself not to hurt you. and just a moment before, you said... "make me one with you". From that moment on words can no longer describe the divine feeling I had... I will leave it to you.

Comments (6)


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cagewench

6:34AM | Thu, 23 September 2004

Loved it! (ok, so I lolly-gagged a bit to read this before I left for the day) :)

efry_e

10:28AM | Thu, 23 September 2004

Thank you for giving me the courage to upload it.. It was kind of tough desicion.

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experimental

3:50PM | Thu, 23 September 2004

For a minute there I thought you were going to go into a bloody murder scene, but you cut off just before it. Very tasteful method, I rather enjoyed it.

gallimel

1:11AM | Fri, 24 September 2004

Experimental just said it: it's something involving, somethhing tickling, that drags you in with powerful feelings, but it always remains tastey, never overcoming the thin line between charme and exxagerated descriptionary boldness. I find this writing VERY well done dear. I ma very happy you've shared it with us :) Luv, Meli :)

netsia

9:36AM | Fri, 24 September 2004

I, too, am glad you posted this. Metaphorically, this is incredible, can be taken so many ways. I liked the way that I read it.

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BlueLotus7

11:58PM | Wed, 10 November 2004

The scent of eternity, the delicious aroma of Time made the slave and thee the Master...of erotic dances across space...excellent! The depth plumbs my soul.


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