~~Mango & Wine Kisses~~ by Blush
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Description
Mango and wine kisses
and misty rose whispers
flows like ripples in a pond~
Sweltering springs
and Smoky Mountain wine
swirling with ruby red notions~
Feverish lips drinking with desire
upon a bearskin rug
in a hideaway chalet~
Mango and wine kisses
Misty rose whispers
please uncork this yearning of mine
Tickle me with whispers of bluegrass
up and down my spine
as I kiss the southern lights
in your Smoky Mountain eyes~
Comments (28)
SerenityBlue
What a terrific poem! We passed by a winery today, and the poem fit the aroma coming from their wine making. Funny, those fumes cleared up my asthma! It was like a miracle. Take care, hun...luvs and kisses to you and your mom. ~Char
TallPockets
Superb. Vote.
adm5050
Now that is totally cool, outstanding prose.
antje
Beautiful and very romantic poem :o) Excellent! :o)
stevermstrong
Been there, goin back, to that place in heart and mind when these thoughts and images come to view. Awesome and romantic... Thanks for sharing and I hope Mom is better....Peace be with you.
MrTed
Your poetry is beautiful and moving.I cant write a lick of poetry and I sometimes barely understand it ,lol.But I do know if I like the way it sounds. No matter how you say it ....Love is a powerful thing......and a good wine helps lol
Jalen
excellent Susan...i try avoiding anything that speaks of romantic love..but cant stop myself when you are writing about it..entranced from your very first word unril the end...you have such a phenomenal gift and thnks for sharing it with all of us ..praying that your mom is better..speaking of which i created something for you and her...notified u by email..but it was too full...HLNGB2YNYLO...L;)))
RobertTheoret
Great work and words. Hope your mom is doing OK? Well done on the poem. BRAVOS!!!
ann0314
You have SUCH an INCREDIBLE way with words...I always say this and I'll say it again LOL...you appeal to all the senses which is just incredible...your metaphores make you smell and feel and see...which is just SUCH an incredible talent!!! AWESOME!!! HUGE VOTE
romanceworks
Oh, this is marvelous. So romantic and sensual - I adored every word. Vote. :o) CC
tallpindo
Jalen has pointed you out so I hope I am an encouraging spirit to you. Summer wine and elderberry wine once sprouted in my father's basement. It was quite a surprise and changed the relationship in the house.
Mondwin
Outstanding prose, and splendid poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "HUGS VOTE" with love Whylma.
cagewench
Loved it. It makes me want to drink wine and I avidly avoid wine ;)
Elfenberry
Wow a travelogue of passion. You words want to take me into deep desire and then I'm tickled by the light-hearted notions. Very very nice.
Hyria
lovely little poem :)
B_PEACOCK
Very lovely poem :)
ObsidianLogic
love is a fine wine unto its self some times it has a bite but its always sweet wonderful poem
cynlee
what a beautiful setting you create... sounds so cozy :]
madame
Wonderful poem as always your words are so beautiful and very romantic too !!
Elfenone
Wow, I think your muse is doing some awesome things to your romantic spirit.. this IS beautiful!
odditorium
this is cool!!
DennisReed
Magnificent piece Susan! You must have a young heart! Bravo and Hugs!
naria
wow, love it. So romantic. You have a wonderful way with words, they flow so well!!!
awadissk
Lovely words Susan I like it, I wish all the bet to your Mom!!!!!
meico
A gorgeously romantic poem ... lucky man! Just to let you know I've looked at and enjoyed all the amazing images you've posted whilst I've been away. I'll begin commenting normally after today.
avalonfaayre
So romantic and beautiful. This takes my breath. The vision in my mind is so pure and sweet.
Shadane
this is wonderful! well done my friend
davidoblad
Just love your poems! Sure makes me miss my lost love. Wax romantic all you want, I have plenty of tissues. Hope you moms doing better. I just took my mom under my wing for health reasons. Say HI if so desired, on my 'interlude'. Dave :^)